Thursday, November 4, 2010

blog 11

In Let Them Eat Fat"Critser argues how fastfood and restaurant have been the object of critism by nutritionist and dietitions.According to Critiser the fastfood has increase publicly and they are targeting the poor inner city communities.The fastfood have increase and the calories have increase from 680 to more than 1,340 calories.
After reading this article,i tink people should really consider the nutrition facts in fastfoods,because they are not serving us the right kind of nutrition that the body needs to function well.As Critser stated in in the article,"the total caloric content of the meal has been jacked up from 680 calories to more than 1,340 calories.,that is affecting our health.The fastfood contain more fat and carbohydrate and less in protein.
Eating a lot of fastfood can lower your daily physical activities,because we we dont take in the right kind of nutrition we need ,for instance i have experinced it,i was into fastfood,i ate it mostly daily and i put on weight and my physical activity was dropped.Fastfood know how to get their way with people so they use the word "supersizing"meaning they will make the food in super size and everything will be doubled the regular size.We get so euphoric about the whole optimum of supersizing our meal but instead we supersizing our bodies.
They have the sign "if we dont recommend a supersize,the supersize is free",nothing in this world is free,they make the food in such a way that you pay a little extra but we wouldnt care as long as we get it in a supersize,but that also a nice and neat way to get money from us.I hope fastfoods will change their nutrition fact.

2 comments:

  1. Blog Series Evaluation 4: Overall, this is a fine series of blog entries, except that you are missing Blog 12.

    For the next set of blogs, I recommend that you try to write a bit longer. Also, sometimes what you are saying is hard to understand because of the way you organize and punctuate your ideas. You may want to consider signing up for the Grammar and Syntax class during Fall II or Spring I. It will help you write clearer.

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  2. FROM DIANA

    Hi :)
    My names is Diana. I'm a tutor at my writing class and just wanted to give you a
    few points about your summary.

    I really like that you found different key points in the article and
    incorporated them in your summary. The change in calorie intake, the "supersize"
    idea, and cheaper food are all points found in the article and you used them
    well. Also good use of quotes but just be careful of where and how you punctuate
    them.
    You should definitely watch out for spelling and the way you organize your
    sentences. There are a couple of run-on sentences that you can break down into
    two or three sentences. In particularly, the very last paragraph. You can break
    the first sentence with periods or commas wherever it makes sense to do so. One
    more thing, very specifically, "fastfood" is not a person. When you refer to
    fastfood it seems like you considered it to be a person that can take an action
    towards people. You might want to say something like "fastfood restaurants" or
    "fastfood advertisements".. something within these lines so that your statements
    are more clear.

    Btw! I had Professor X last semester for my Shakespeare class. She is awesome!
    and you learn so much from her. Best of luck ;)

    D.

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